[Mastering-perl] misc typos/comments (Ch. 3, 11, 14, A2)

[David Westbrook]

sounds like this is getting towards the end (just joined the list) ..
noticed a couple/few things while reading through some of the chapters:

03.taint-checking.html
  * "putting it somewhere close the front of your path," should be "close
to"

11.configuration.html
  * "If I attempt to modify any of these variables Perl give me a warning."
should be "gives" or "will give"
  * "These data can come from"  ... should that be "This data"?
  * Saw a few spots where a module name wasn't linked to it's pod (seemed
that most places were) ..
      "The Config module exposes"
      "I can use the Readonly module"
      "I find Getopt::Std, Getopt::Long, and 87 other"

14.persistence.html
  * There's a couple places where it's displaying "Data::Dumper-new>"
instead of "Data::Dumper->new" (conversion issue?)
  * "I give Data::Dumper-new> an anonymous arrays"  should be "array"
(singular)
  * (just curious; did find the rest quite useful, including the in-depth
Dumper discussion) Was SQLite considered for mention in this chapter?  While
it's more robust in terms of being close to a "proper" db server, it being
server-less it does fit right into "This chapter is about lightweight
techniques I can use when I don't need a full server back-end." and has the
advantage (also DBD::CSV or DBD::AnyData) of being lightweight/fast to get
up-and-going but also a precursor to a "proper" db server (the transition
can be as easy as changing the DSN in the DBI->connect call)

A2.brians_guide.html
  * "You can check the most module version" should be "most recent"
  ==> excellent read .. found it completely accurate and very easy to relate
to, and something that every programmer should see

--david

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